I like the tone on her skin. Looks like a blue filter. Also the amount of grain makes this photo better to me. I take it it's Tri-x 400? Maybe shot @ 1600 ASA? I'm curious what settings you used in this indoor setting. If I guessed I'd say maybe f2 1/60 or 1/30 @ 1600 ASA?
very nice composition
absolutely love it!
I like the graininess and the composition: looks like she is sandwiched in somewhere she doesn't quite belong and is taking that one last second to consider what she does next - does she leap in, or back out...
how much a love your work... such atmosphere from every shot
nice tones and pose